MC25's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Immortal I]

really fucking kewl

very nice! this deserve's to go strait to the goth collection because it was really funny! at first i thought that it would be like a short music video because of the title, but then it turned out to be like a TV length episode of some sort of a series! now the animation was a little crappy, but good considering the fact that it was so long.

My only 2 suggestions are:

Don't rush the animation process since it is kind of important.

the dialogue was a little bit slow so try to speed it up or make it more entertaining

[A Red Red Rose]

Sweet i guess

this should definatly go in the serious film section
even though there is no violence, sex, or jokes whatsoever, i think this goes on my favorites list!

[caution city episode 1]

sweet

definatly make more, improve the animation a bit, and try to mak a game out of it once u learn flash a little better!

[Chad Weathers the Weather]

very niiiice!

good first submission, very funny, and i hope to see more movies with these 2 characters in the near future!
(*hint* next time don't be afraid to use bad language, blood, or even nudity, it will usually make your flashes funnier and sometimes attract new viewers!)

Pelemus-McSoy responds:

I know, but Bill and Chad were born out of education...

Bill was originally was designed in English class when we were drawing vocab words...Chad came soon after.

These two then became stars in my comic books for history...

That's why there's nothing "mature". There might be some in the future...

Thank you so much for your kind words!

~Pelo

[Sonic gross adventures 1]

Obviously your first flash...

But you did a good job, it was sorta boring but at least you did sprites instead of stick figures like most noobs do! Also good animation, again better than many noobs! only two suggestions... use the characters video game voices instead of just subtitles... and don't stop posting your flash here because some people are tough critics!

StepanoVFlake666 responds:

Thank yoy very much...good luck!!!

[El Emigrante Cactus Part2]

Solid Series

I guess its safe for me to say i don't need to worry about any of your submissions getting blammed when vote a 5 on them anymore for the protection point, because apparently lots of people enjoy your work too. you have a good little series running on newgrounds and you should be proud of your work!

[Bert 1]

It was okay...

The story and humor was very easily good enough for newgrounds, and it was very funny, but there are a few key things you should work on...

If you improve the animation and give the characters their own voices instead of just subtitles... you could maybe have a solid series on newgrounds!

kielty7 responds:

Appreciate the review, thxs :)

[El Emigrante: Blimp Part1]

Only one annoying problem...

You should really stop breaking El Emigrante down into parts of 3, they should be one submission per story.

There may be some points or awards thing that I'm not getting at, but to a viewer it can be very bothersome.

But other than that, the cartoon was seamless, so i hope to see more El Emigrante cartoons soon!

transience1 responds:

well you see my site won't hold anything over 750 kb per file so that's why i split it up